This is really powerful. It's been a while since I saw Razor, but I think you captured Kendra's quiet despair perfectly, with lines like "suffocating slow." And I absolutely love how Kara was brought in at the beginning and the end, when Kendra spares her. And the pigeon with a broken wing is both perfect in context, and, as chaila43 points out, oddly appropriate. ;) Excellent work!
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Date: 2009-08-22 03:06 am (UTC)